For Len
Your touch ripples me liquid
Swelling tides within
As whispers of miracles
Drop like pins
Summoning angels
Dancing a trance
Water moves through our low spots
Surging sighs
That ebb our flow
Until shores reemerge
Spent with foam
And soft sweet sleep
Evens our tide
Brenda Warren 2017
You have wisely dumped the words that would have ruined this lovely mood.
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Such rich emotion you’ve put into this. Lovely.
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such a warm and loving poem
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Ooh, very rhythmic Brenda. I like how it flows.
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Beautiful poem, Brenda. Love the title, too.
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Heavens. You had me at the title. Just so gorgeous.
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Thanks, De. 💗
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Your beautiful ideas, congealed into words that “ripples me liquid”…. before me, behind me, above and under. As I read our words, I am surrounded by your thoughts,
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What a lovely comment. Thank you, Annell! 💗
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This is really lovely!
Come Whirl with me!
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Thank you, Keith!
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Lucky Len 🙂
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Lucky me, too! 😍
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Love this!
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Thanks!
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