Into the couch of your grave I fly,
never questioning why to your eye.
I watch you die.
Day by day
machine play
in never-lounge cushions.
Cards against humanity.
A symbol-grinding ending to the groove of who we were.
Echoes of flies
fill time’s windows.
A volume of buzzing collides
with words set fire.
You are almost gone,
like syllables stoked to ash.
Brenda Warren 2016
‘A symbol-grinding ending to the groove of who we were’ – Wow! I love the way you used the prompt words throughout this excellent piece.
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That tantalizing sound of others winning (even small returns) prevents them from giving up. How easy it is to picture the scene. Beautiful writing Brenda.
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This one moves on a very deep level. Your use of the words telling, yet very evocative. Thanks Brenda,
Elizabeth
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I feel like I’m in Vegas. You used “grinding” and “groove” so well.
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within all the christmas cheer, an honest poem. thanks
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Each word and sound brilliantly placed – but the last verse really left an impression – thank you by the way for all your whirl words.. hope you have a peaceful holiday season
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