Delirium swished her dappled colors against dawn’s clear sky
blue air pleated seemings like a god’s strident breath
reigniting dappled rays of sunshine
pitched in place by swirling seas
breaching the shell of delirium’s sweet breeze.
Brenda Warren 2011
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This piece was inspired by this week’s words at The Sunday Whirl. Check out the whirl for more pieces incorporating these words.
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Swirling seas and sweet breeze – what a lovely finish. How did you get all those words into such a tidy package? Brava! Amy
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Okay, now I am really impressed! Brava to you Brenda,
Elizabeth
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Neat and EXCELLENT!
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I like “a god’s strident breath”. What a delightful breeze, and I enjoyed your news.
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Excellent, perfect, beautiful visions, Brenda.
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Very clever, Brenda! One of the shortest wordle poems you have written. Must be due to your busy life. I too like what you did with ‘delirium.’ And yes, congratulations to your daughter on her achievement!
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Thanks for coming through for us, in spite of your very busy life! Loved the picture of your daughter & her friend in their sassy team outfits. And loved this perceptive poem!
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I love how you use delirium… lovely image, Brenda!
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I like this so much, Brenda. Makes me want to go back and try again with my own!
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Brenda, this is so good. A nice concise piece. I am now regretting reading yours before attempting mine 🙂
Congrats to your beautiful daughter and her friend. You are an inspiration for all of us.
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Love it!
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You let your creative side run wild, Brenda. I like it. “God’s strident breath:” what a powerful metaphor.
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A tight fit of the wordle words!! Concise story inbuilt with nature existing as an essential part!!
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That’s what I call economical with the wordle words!
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