white to black gradations
corrugate lines that
gather at a central fertile nub
an amphitheater where
droplets converge to
witness light’s slow miracles
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The inspiration for this piece is a picture by Adam Romanowicz. You can click on the picture to visit his website. A shout out to One Stop Poetry for an interview with Romanowicz. Visit the link for more inspired writes.
Very pretty write to the pic, Brenda.
Pamela
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Wonderful description, I love watching droplets gather and grow.
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that was sweet to read.
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imagine sitting in a palm leaf, watching!
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delightful, right? You made me think of the movie Ferngully. It’s like Avatar, only a cartoon, and it came first. 🙂
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We all look to the centre, it’s a strange phenomenon lol, it’s a balloon though isn’t it?
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I found the photo on his website, and it’s called “palm leaf abstract in black and white.” It is interesting that the center draws us.
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a beautiful write. wonderful take on the picture
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Love the miracles eluded to… the dreamy essence shines through.
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That’s lovely – and I love the amphitheater metaphor.
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Thanks Glynn, me too. It’s summer in Montana, time for outdoor theater events.
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nice…love the image of it as an amplitheatre for the raindrops…there is a lot of beauty to life…that it could appreciate itself is a nice thought…
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Intentional use of personification…I didn’t know what else to do with it than make it tell me why it was there.
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Great transformation of nub into amphitheater to provide a stage for the strem water droplets. Very creative and well stated. Claudia says “beautiful and dreamy.” I agree.
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Thanks. Much like a stage, the nub draws our eye. The nub…what’s that about? ha!
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witnessing light’s slow miracles..this is beautiful and dreamy and somehow gives my phantasy wings..
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Thank you, I like it too. It did take some playing with, but when I tried to decide what the droplets gathered to witness, it fell into place. It’s kind of a dreamy morning here, birds are singing, the sun is playing about.
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